Below is the treatment document I created for episode 3 of Ascension.
The Feedback I received for this treatment was very positive. My actual writing style was praised, however I was told that there doesn't seem to be a lot happening storywise at the Lodge, and was asked to improve on this by making more things happen there.
A change that I was asked to perform before uploading this treatment here was to remove the photos that I had included. The reason for this was that they didn't really add anything to the document itself, which I completely understand. Removing them was not an issue at all.
I am very happy with the way my first treatment went, and I am pleased that my writing style was suitable enough to get the point of my story across. Now that I am aware of the kind of writing style required when writing a treatment document, I am confident enough that I feel I could do a decent job on the treatments for other episodes.
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