I feel that the general pace of the video is something I should aim for in the final version, and the shots I have used are rather creative and suit the flow of the video. However, there are a few things I noticed once I had completed the rough cut which I will seek to rectify in the final version.
- There are several issues with the sound. The music is extremely quiet and the sound of each interview is quite inconsistent in their levels.
- The music doesn't really fit the style of the promo, but will do for now as a place-holder.
- The interview segments (especially the one with Nicholas) go on for quite a while, and can get quite boring to look at. Perhaps I could insert some more cutaways, or images related to what he is speaking about in order to keep viewers interested.
I also noticed that I haven't followed the brief at certain points, which is essential for me to sort out. The brief states that several details, such as the fact that the charities registration number, the logo of the funding association and some details such as a telephone number are absent.
I did not include a telephone number because the only number and email address I have at the moment are those that belong to Nicholas Ward, and I am unsure as of now whether or not they are personal details, or related to his work with the Friday People. As such, it would be very unprofessional of me to publish them.
The Brief and details:
The Brief and details:
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